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How can you convince someone to stop smoking?

이승훈/2025-01-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
well,,i think in order to stop smoking, most important is smoker's will. but most smokers weaked will. because smokers are already addicited. so we have to force to them. first, we have to take away from smoker's ciggarate. second we have to saying smoke is very smell. so t think smoker feel very sorry. i think stop smoking is very difficult. very important is will yourself.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hun!
I agree! A person's willpower is very important when it comes to quitting vices. I remember that even cigarette brands added pictures of the possible side effects of smoking on cigarette packaging, but still, it did not scare smokers. Convincing them is really hard if they don't plan to quit.
- T. Caitlyn 
well,,i think in order to stop smoking, most important is smoker's will.
>> Well, I think in order to stop smoking, the most important thing is the smoker's will.
but most smokers weaked will.
>> But most smokers have a weakened will.
because smokers are already addicited. so we have to force to them.
>> Because smokers are already addicted si we have to force them.
first, we have to take away from smoker's ciggarate.
>> First, we have to take away the smoker's cigarettes.
second we have to saying smoke is very smell.
>> Second, we have to tell them that smoking smells bad.
so t think smoker feel very sorry.
>> So I think smokers will feel very sorry.
i think stop smoking is very difficult.
>> I think stopping smoking is very difficult.
very important is will yourself.
>> The most important thing is your own willpower.
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