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박소은/2025-01-02

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The Gyeongboggung is most popular place in my country. The Gyeongboggung is where we can see the thing that was in past.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!

Please be reminded of the proper use of articles.

Also be careful of your word choice.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

The Gyeongboggung is most popular place in my country.

>> Gyeongboggung is the most popular place in my country.
The Gyeongboggung is where we can see the thing that was in past.

>> Gyeongboggung is where we can see historical objects from the past.