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If you could create a new holiday, what would it celebrate, and how would people participate?
박소은/2025-01-02
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to make the finish day on 12/31.
It's because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Please make your statements more simple and clear.
Direct expression of thoughts is the key.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to make the finish day on 12/31.
>> I want to make the last day of the year special.
It's because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
It's because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
>> It's because I hope we can celebrate studying hard this year.
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