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Describe a place that makes you feel happy and explain why it’s special to you.

박소은/2025-01-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The place that makes me happy is my home. It's because in my home I can do everything that I want to do and it is completable.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Please learn more vocabulary words.
Go over the words and expressions we learn every day.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The place that makes me happy is my home.
>> Correct
It's because in my home I can do everything that I want to do and it is completable.
>> It's because in my home, I can do everything that I want to do and everything is complete.
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