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What is included in your "Bucket List"

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회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. I want to see my favorite football club. 2. I want to be an aircraft engineer. 3. I want to travel in Europe 4. I want to drive my dream car. 5. I want to see the Aurora
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Merry Christmas, Jun!
Did you read the history of bucket lists? Well,l I hope your mind won't be confused about that!
Thank you for this!
Have a great celebration.
T. Aki~

1. I want to see my favorite football club.
>>> CORRECT!

2. I want to be an aircraft engineer.
>>> CORRECT!

3. I want to travel in Europe.
>>> I want to travel to Europe.

4. I want to drive my dream car.
>>> CORRECT!

5. I want to see the Aurora.
>>> CORRECT!

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