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What do you think of men who apply makeup on their faces or use a lot of skincare products?

차유진/2024-12-10

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I think they are not bed because if put on makeup make look pretty or cool so I think men apply makeup is not bed. But I don't like makeup because reality is good, too.
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                             What do you think of men who apply makeup on their faces or use a lot of skincare products?



I think they are not bed because if put on makeup make look pretty or cool so I think men apply makeup is not bed.
>> I don't disapprove of them because putting on makeup makes one look pretty or cool so I think men applying makeup is not bad.

But I don't like makeup because reality is good, too.
>> But I don't like to put on makeup because the natural look is good, too.
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