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What are effective ways to keep our minds sharp as we age? Do you have any habits or activities that

신봉규/2024-12-09

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I think reading and exercise are an effective way to keep our minds sharp. Reading a book can help us think more and help us grow further.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think reading and exercise are an effective way to keep our minds sharp. Reading a book can help us think more and help us grow further.
>> I think reading and exercising are effective ways to keep our minds sharp. Reading books can stimulate our thinking and contribute to personal growth.
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