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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hello
Eva,
You did
a great job with this homework! I can see you really thought about the impact
celebrities can have on others, which is an important point. Youre right that
celebrities have a lot of influence and that people might follow their opinions
because they admire them. Your idea that celebrities should be careful with
their actions is clear and thoughtful. It's great that you're considering the
consequences of their influence. Keep up the good work, youre making great
progress in expressing your ideas! Just remember, the more you practice, the
easier it will become to express your thoughts in English. Keep going!
~Teacher
Cathy
I think that celebrities should not take a stand on political and social
issues.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
believe celebrities should refrain from taking a stance on political and social
issues.
Celebrities can have strong effect on people.
>>Celebrities
can have a strong effect on people.
Sometimes a lot of people follow a their celebrity.
>>Sometimes,
many people follow their celebrity.
We can see celebrity in the TV or YouTube.
>>We
can see celebrities on TV or YouTube.
We think that they are very smart and winner.
>>We
think that they are very smart and successful.
If I did like them, I feel like succeed. If they make a choice, l will
do it.
>>If
I liked them, I would feel successful. If they made a choice, I would follow
it.
People have one's thoughts, but it is become problem to follow
celebrities thoughts.
>>People
have their own thoughts, but it becomes a problem when they follow celebrities'
opinions.
Celebrities should take care of one's actions.
>>Celebrities
should take care of their actions.