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Should beauty standards include people of all shapes, sizes, and colors?

이진태/2024-12-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I believe that it is natural to include apperance in a beauty standards. However we should think not only appearances, but also inner beauty.
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I believe that it is natural to include apperance in a beauty standards.
>>I believe that appearance is naturally included in beauty standards.

However we should think not only appearances, but also inner beauty.
>>However, we should consider not only appearance but also inner beauty.
OR >> However, we should focus on both inner beauty and appearance.
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