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What part does luck play in success?

이진태/2024-12-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Luck is important part for our lives. I saw many cases that someone has good skills but hasn't success. It's luck problem. It is impossible to achieve success only skill.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Luck is important part for our lives.
>> Luck is an important part of our lives.

I saw many cases that someone has good skills but hasn't success.
>> I’ve seen many cases where someone has good skills but hasn't achieved success.

It's luck problem.
>> It's a matter of luck.

It is impossible to achieve success only skill.
>> It is impossible to achieve success with only skill.
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