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류영주/2024-12-09

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Q: What advice can you give someone facing so many life challenges? A: I think I can advise to be calm, and do those one by one. If a person encounters so many challenges, he easily get panicked, but he should be calm to go through them all. Also, if one tries to solve a lot of problems at once, he can get tired and give up.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Paul!

It sounds like you’ve been thinking about how to manage life's challenges in a calm and thoughtful way. This is an important perspective! Thank you for taking your time.

~ Teacher Trixia

HOMEWORK:

I think I can advise to be calm, and do those one by one.
- CORRECT.

>> I think my advice would be to stay calm and tackle them one by one.
If a person encounters so many challenges, he easily get panicked, but he should be calm to go through them all.

- If a person faces many challenges, they may easily panic, but they should remain calm in order to overcome them.
Also, if one tries to solve a lot of problems at once, he can get tired and give up.

- CORRECT.

>> Additionally, if someone tries to solve too many problems at once, they might become exhausted and give up.