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Is it fair to punish children for making mistakes?

이진태/2024-12-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In Korean's law, there is a limitation for punishing kids. If kid who is under thriteen years old commits crime, it is no guilty. However, I beileve that thriteen years old is too high enough. Limitation should be decreased.
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Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

In Korean's law, there is a limitation for punishing kids.
>> According to Korean law, there is a limitation on punishing children.

If kid who is under thriteen years old commits crime, it is no guilty.
>> If a child under thirteen years old commits a crime, they are not held legally guilty.

However, I beileve that thriteen years old is too high enough.
>> However, I believe that thirteen years old is too high an age for this limitation.

Limitation should be decreased.
>> The age limit should be lowered.
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