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What is more important to care for mental or physical health?

신봉규/2024-11-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that physical health leads to a healthy mental Because being healthy gives me confidence.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think that physical health leads to a healthy mental Because being healthy gives me confidence.
>> I think that physical health leads to a healthy mind because being healthy gives me confidence.
OR >> I believe that good physical health contributes to mental well-being, as staying healthy boosts my confidence.
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