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이영숙/2024-11-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I miss a lot childhood my friends. I ask to my friends hurry up become a adult. when i think to childhood my childhood miss me. i want to back to the childhood.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Michelle!

I feel the same. I miss my childhood and I miss being a child without any worries. When we were young, we thought being an adult was a good thing, but now we realize that there are a lot of responsibilities and it's harder than we thought.

- T. Caitlyn

I miss a lot childhood my friends.

>> I miss my childhood friends a lot.
I ask to my friends hurry up become a adult.

>> I ask my friends to hurry up and become adults.
when i think to childhood my childhood miss me.

When I think about my childhood, I miss it.

i want to back to the childhood.

>> I want to go back to my childhood.