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What’s the most thoughtful gesture you’ve received from a friend?

임주미/2024-11-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The most thoughttful action is a hug and hold my hand, when my parents passed away my friends visted our funeral hall. They huged me,I was consoled from them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jumi! Sometimes, gestures can mean a lot more than words. ^^ It's awesome that you have some really good friends. Anyway, I hope you'll enjoy your weekend. Goodluck on your test!
~T. Jewel
The most thoughttful action is a hug and hold my hand,
>>The most thoughtful gesture I've received is a hug and holding my hand.
OR
>>The most thoughtful gesture I've received is when someone hugged me and held my hand.
when my parents passed away my friends visted our funeral hall.
>>When my parents passed away, my friends visited the funeral hall.
They huged me, I was consoled from them
>>They hugged me, and I was consoled by them.
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