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김재현/2024-11-28

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Hi Teacher Divina, Happy Thursday Thank you for giving me homework. Homework How some people get easily sick? My answer I think some people are not doing healthy management. So almost people are not good immunity.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think some people are not doing healthy management.

>>CORRECT!

2. So almost people are not good immunity.

>>So, some people don't have good immune system.