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양윤영/2024-11-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I lost my friend once all my life. She did’t like me for no reason and she was alienate between me and other friends. We were grow apart from her slowly.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yun!

I'm sorry to hear about your former friend. That's a sad story. I wonder why she did that. Anyway, people come and go in our lives so treasure only those who love you back. See you later in class ^^

~Teacher Kate

I lost my friend once all my life.

>>I lost a friend once in my life.
She did’t like me for no reason and she was alienate between me and other friends.

>>She didn't like me for no reason and she alienated herself from me and our other friends.

We were grow apart from her slowly.

>>We grew apart from her slowly.