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My apartment neighbors are very kind they are always say hello. But, some neighbors is very annoying because some neighbors dog is very noisy.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Good eve!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What are your thoughts on your neighbors? Explain.

My apartment neighbors are very kind they are always say hello.

>> My apartment neighbors are very kind and they always say "hello".

But, some neighbors is very annoying because some neighbors dog is very noisy.

>> But, some neighbors are very annoying because their dogs are very noisy.