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Do you often greet strangers in public places like on the street, in an elevator, or at the store?
이복희/2024-11-28
회원님의 올려주신 영작문Hello Eva,
Your perspective on greeting
strangers is very clear, and it shows that you value your personal space and
time. It's understandable that after working in a job where greeting strangers
was required, you'd prefer to focus on yourself and your family now. It's great
that you prioritize what truly matters to you. Everyone has different comfort
levels when it comes to interacting with others, and it's okay to set
boundaries that make you happy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I can see how thoughtful
and self-aware you are!
~Teacher Cathy
I
don't greet strangers.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
don't acknowledge strangers.
I
don't like greet strangers.
>>I
don't like greeting strangers.
When I
worked l always greet strangers.
>>When
I was working, I always greeted strangers.
Because
my workplace visited a lot of people.
>>Because
a lot of people visited my workplace.
To
greet strangers was one of the my gob.
>>To
greet strangers was part of my job.
Now I
don't need to meet strangers.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Now,
I don't need to meet strangers anymore.
So I
am very happy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So
I'm glad.
I am
not interest in other people.
>>I
am not interested in other people.
I am
interest in myself and my family.
>>I
am interested in myself and my family.
My
coutry people are interest in other people.
>>Other
people in my country are interested in other people.
I
don't like it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
dislike it.
I am
getting old, I am not enough time, so l want to watch my life.
>>I
am getting older, and I don’t have enough time, so I want to focus on living my
life for myself.
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