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Write about your trip last week.

차진혁/2024-11-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I went to the Gangwon-do. First day I'm eat cow guck bap and going to the hotel. Second day I'm eating the Korean red crab and going to the sea.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's another corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of the day! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                    Write about your trip last week.


I went to the Gangwon-do.
>> I went to Gangwon-do.

First day I'm eat cow guck bap and going to the hotel.
>> On the first day, I ate beef guck bap and stayed at a hotel.

Second day I'm eating the Korean red crab and going to the sea.
>> On the second day, I ate Korean red crab and went to the sea.
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