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이영숙/2024-11-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The main character of the day decide the place wants. * IS THIS NOT HOMEWORK* WHAT I WANT TO ASK TO MY TEACHER..... TODAY WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DAY. BECAUSE IT SNOWED ALL DAY. THE WHITE COLOR ALL CHANGED ON THE TREES AND THE WHOLE SEOUL STREETS. AND MY HEART WAS HAPPY AS I BECOME IS CHILD. FEELS LIKE CHRSTMAS IS COMING.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Michelle!
I feel very happy that you feel happy today. It's nice that you appreciate the beauty of winter. Let's talk more about this in class.
- T. Caitlyn
The main character of the day decide the place wants.
>> The main character of the day decides the place they want.
* IS THIS NOT HOMEWORK*
>> This is not a homework.
WHAT I WANT TO ASK TO MY TEACHER.....
>> What I want to tell my teacher.
TODAY WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DAY BECAUSE IT SNOWED ALL DAY.
>> CORRECT 
THE WHITE COLOR ALL CHANGED ON THE TREES AND THE WHOLE SEOUL STREETS.
>> The white snow covered all the trees and the entire streets of Seoul.
AND MY HEART WAS HAPPY AS I BECOME IS CHILD.
>> And my heart was happy as I felt like a child again.
FEELS LIKE CHRSTMAS IS COMING.
>> It feels like Christmas is coming.
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