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양윤영/2024-11-27

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I’m a follower of my favorite YouTuber now. I like it now but I think I want to be a leader sometimes. Because I envy them and look a cool. I imaging myself filming and editing videos.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Yun!
Great Writing! Thanks for making an effort to answer the question for the day! I wonder who your favorite Youtuber is! It must be a great content creator. See you later in class!
~~Teacher Kate 

I’m a follower of my favorite YouTuber now.
>>CORRECT!
I like it now but I think I want to be a leader sometimes.
>>CORRECT!
Because I envy them and look a cool.
>>It's because I envy them and they look so cool. 
I imaging myself filming and editing videos.
>>I imagine myself filming and editing videos.
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