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Are you a good sport? Explain.

차유진/2024-12-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No,I'm not a good sport because when I play sports I get angry a lot and sometimes I don't follow sports manners. So our team lose.
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Here's another correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night's sleep! 


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Jean~~



                                     

                             
                     

                                              Are you a good sport? Explain.

No,I'm not a good sport because when I play sports I get angry a lot and sometimes I don't follow sports manners.
>>> No, I'm not a good sport because I get angry a lot and I sometimes don't follow sports etiquette when I play sports. 

So our team lose.
>>> So our team loses. 
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