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What do you think is the worst sport ever created? Why?

차유진/2024-12-26

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I think the worst sport is throwing spear because spear is a weapon so it is dangerous. But I don't hate throwing spear because it is one of sports.
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Enjoy the rest of your evening! 


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                       What do you think is the worst sport ever created? Why?

I think the worst sport is throwing spear because spear is a weapon so it is dangerous.
>>> I think the worst sport is the javelin throw because a spear is a weapon so it is dangerous.

But I don't hate throwing spear because it is one of sports.
>>> But I don't hate javelin throw because it is one of the official sports.



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