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My Favorite Season

안예인/2024-11-14

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What is your favorite season? My favorite season is Summer. Beacause I like swim.
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Here's your corrected composition, Ye In.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you when I see you! 


Cheers,
Jean~~





                                  What is your favorite season?


My favorite season is Summer. Beacause I like swim.
>> My favorite season is summer because I like swimming. 
>> OR: I enjoy swimming so my favorite season is summer. 
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