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김재현/2024-11-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi Teacher Divina Happy Wednesday! Thank you for giving me homework. Homework Is there any habit that you want to break. My answer The habit that I want to break is lazy thing. For example , I make on my phone for 10 minutes but for a hour. There were a lot of cases like this, It was interfere my study .
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for your answers!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

The habit that I want to break is lazy thing.
>>The habit that I want to break is being lazy.

For example , I make on my phone for 10 minutes but for a hour.
>>For example, I use my phone for 10 minutes, but it reaches for an hour.

There were a lot of cases like this, It was interfere my study .
>>There were a lot of cases like this, and it interferes with my study.

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