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If you could trade your entire collection for something else, would you? What would you trade it for

임주미/2024-11-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have a chance, I want to trade other dishes, if I like that Beacouse I already use and old my thing.I would like to get different plates. I think I always want new one.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ju Mi! I hope you can trade your collection with someone who loves plates and dishes as much as you do. ^^ Thank you for today. See you next week in class!
~T. Jewel
If I have a chance, I want to trade other dishes, if I like that
>>If I have a chance, I would like to trade my collection for other dishes if I like them.
Beacouse I already use and old my thing.
>>Because I already use them, and they are quite old now.
I would like to get different plates.
>>I would like to have different plates.
I think I always want new one.
>>I think I always want a new one.
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