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양기연/2024-11-15

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I think EBS TV programs are more various and more commercial than those of its radio programs. The programs of EBS radio are mostly educational. They offer programs for studying foreign languages from 5a.m. to 10 a.m., and reruns them in the evening.
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Hello, Gi Yean!
I am really amazed by how much importance Koreans place on learning, to the point that the government even has radio and TV programs dedicated to education, making it accessible to everyone. I think this is a great way to show that people can still learn even at home.
- T. Caitlyn 
I think EBS TV programs are more various and more commercial than those of its radio programs. 
>> I think EBS TV programs are more varied and more commercial than its radio programs.
The programs of EBS radio are mostly educational. 
>> CORRECT
They offer programs for studying foreign languages from 5a.m. to 10 a.m., and reruns them in the evening.
>> They offer programs for studying foreign languages from 5 a.m. to 10 a.m. and rerun them in the evening.
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