I think women in korea are satisfied with their life.
Especially they don't have to serve the army.
Companies and national institutions are more and more employing women .
After marriage they are treated like queen.
Because man's conditional of marriage is more hard than woman.
And it is easy to be broken thier marriage if the man don't treat well their partner.
Brides don't need to have in mind of their in laws any more.
There will be not a reason woman's life is worse than man's in korea.
Ms. Sunny,
First off, I would like to congratulate you for making long sentences! Great job, Just simply look at my corrections to make a better statement or sentence just like your first 3 lines. 'Have a great day!
Aki~
I think women in Korea are satisfied with their life.
>>> CORRECT!
Especially they don't have to serve the army.
>>> CORRECT!
Companies and national institutions are more and more employing women .
>>> CORRECT!
After marriage they are treated like queen.
>>> After marriage they are treated like queens.
Because man's conditional of marriage is more hard than woman.
>>> Because a man's conditional of marriage is harder than a woman's.
And it is easy to be broken thier marriage if the man don't treat well their partner.
>>> And it is easy to break their marriage if the man doesn't treat well their partner.
Brides don't need to have in mind of their in laws any more.
>>> Brides don't need to have in mind their in-laws anymore
There will be not a reason woman's life is worse than man's in Korea.
>>> There is no reason a woman's life is worse than a man's in Korea.