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What would you do if you had a few extra hours daily?

이진태/2024-11-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If the overwork is permenant, I'll quit the company quickly. However, If I have an expectation that the company reward to me, I'll be patient.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If the overwork is permenant, I'll quit the company quickly.
>> If the overwork becomes permanent, I'll leave the company quickly.

However, If I have an expectation that the company reward to me, I'll be patient.
>> However, if I believe the company will reward me, I'll be patient.
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