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What outdoor activities do you like to do during autumn?

이진태/2024-11-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like walking on the street with colorful trees in autumn. In autumn, leafs color of tree are changed from green to yellow or red. I go out to enjoy this scenary.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I like walking on the street with colorful trees in autumn.

>> CORRECT

OR >> I enjoy walking on the street surrounded by colorful trees in autumn.

In autumn, leafs color of tree are changed from green to yellow or red.

>> In this season, the leaves change color from green to yellow or red.

I go out to enjoy this scenary.

>> I go out to enjoy this beautiful scenery.