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양윤영/2024-11-08

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If i was live somewhere, I want to live in Malta. Malta have a the Mediterranean Sea location and it’s nice and warm all year round. They use English as their main language. If I‘ll go to there, I learn a English and a lot of use more than Korea. The mart price is cheep in Malta. Those are my reasons.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good morning, Yun!
Thank you for your homework. I see that you relly have decided to go to Malta next year. I hope that you will be able to fulfill your dream once you are there.
Have a great day!
T. Aki~


If i was live somewhere, I want to live in Malta.
>>> If I would have to live somewhere, that would be in Malta.

Malta have a the Mediterranean Sea location and it’s nice and warm all year round.
>>> Malta is located in the Mediterranean Sea so the weather is nice and warm all year round.

They use English as their main language.
>>> CORRECT!

If I‘ll go to there, I learn a English and a lot of use more than Korea.
>>> If I go there, I learn English easily because it is used a lot more than here in Korea.

The mart price is cheep in Malta.
>>> The market price is cheap in Malta.
>>> The cost of living is cheap in Malta

Those are my reasons.
>>> CORRECT!
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