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Do you respect your country's president? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-11-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No I don't because Korea president is close to Japan and It's a war crisis, but he not doing anything. So I don't like my country president but Korean people like Moon Jae In.
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided.  


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                       Do you respect your country's president? Explain your answer.


No I don't because Korea president is close to Japan and It's a war crisis, but he not doing anything.
>> No, I don't because Korea's president has a close relationship with Japan and there's a war crisis, but he does not do anything.

So I don't like my country president but Korean people like Moon Jae In.
>> So I don't like my country's president, but Korean people like Moon Jae In. 
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