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What would a perfect day look like for you?

김영순/2024-11-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Now I think, I have never thought of " a perfect day". I just finish to do of my daily schedule depending on the situation. It"s my pleasure that I spend time to do that. And it looks like a happy day. I will think about a perfect day!!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Young Soon!

You can try writing about the same topic.

Now that I have explained the question, I think you can do better.

I look forward to that.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Now I think, I have never thought of " a perfect day".

>> I'm just thinking now because I have never thought of a "perfect day."
I just finish to do of my daily schedule depending on the situation.

>> I just finish everything according to schedule depending on the situation.
It"s my pleasure that I spend time to do that.

>> I find pleasure when I spend time doing that.
And it looks like a happy day.

>> It looks like a happy day.
I will think about a perfect day!!!

>> Correct