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What's the best company benefit or perk you've received at your job so far?

오혜영/2024-11-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I can choose two things. One is what I went to Jeju-island for workshop. The other is the health check with my spouse. The traveling was not interesting, at that time. But,I change my mind now. I was a benefit. because, I didn’t do work the day. The policy is not from now my company.But The other one is it. My husband can do health check more detail. I think health is more important as getting older.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! Both options were good. It was great that the company offers these perks to their employees. ^^ Thank you for doing homework. Have a great day ahead!

~T. Jewel

I can choose two things.

>>I can choose between two things

One is what I went to Jeju-island for workshop.

>>The first option was going to Jeju Island for a workshop.
The other is the health check with my spouse.

>>The other option was a health checkup with my spouse.
The traveling was not interesting, at that time. But,I change my mind now.

>>The trip wasn’t interesting at the time, but I’ve changed my mind now.
I was a benefit. because, I didn’t do work the day.

>>It was a benefit because I didn’t have to work that day.

The policy is not from now my company.But The other one is it.

>>The policy is not from my company, but the other one is.
My husband can do health check more detail.

>>My husband got a more detailed health checkup.
I think health is more important as getting older.

>>I think health becomes more important as we get older.