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오혜영/2024-10-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hi, jewel. It’s a nice day, although It’s rainning and windy. I attatched my yesterday homework. Have a nice day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! It's rainy and windy here in my place, too. Anyway, I am wondering what this paper snack is that you mentioned in your homework. ^^ Tell me more about it! Thank you and have a great day!

~T. Jewel

I seldom watch TV programs which is selling somethings.

>>I seldom watch TV programs that are selling something.

One day, I happened to watch a program while changing the TV channel.

>>One day, I happened to watch a program while changing the TV channel.

It is a kind of healthy food and looks like small paper difference from others.

>>It is a kind of healthy food and looks like small paper, different from others.
The seller said that the paper had a lot of nutritions.

>>The seller said that the paper had a lot of nutrients.
And it is easy to eat.

>>CORRECT
So, I bought them which I could have for 1 year.

>>So, I bought them, and I could have them for one year.
Cut it half, I gave it to my mom and have been eat the other half.

>>I cut it in half, gave one part to my mom, and have been eating the other half.
I don’t know how much be healthier than befor.

>>I don’t know how much healthier it is than before.
But I’m sure that it is absolutely delious.

>>But I’m sure that it is absolutely delicious.