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Which appliance do you use the most, and how often do you rely on it?

임주미/2024-10-23

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I use the most LG sryler nowdays once a day or twice days. when I return home from outside I put my street wear in the styler .It remove dust and smell ,it take 30 minutes.

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Hi, Ju Mi! Your LG Styler is a must-have! I hope I can buy one too! Anyway, I appreciate the time you took to do your homework today. Thank you, and have a great day!

~T. Jewel

I use the most LG sryler nowdays once a day or twice days.

>>I use the LG Styler once a day or every two days nowadays.

when I return home from outside I put my street wear in the styler .

>>When I come home, I put my streetwear in the styler.

It remove dust and smell, it take 30 minutes.

>>It only takes 30 minutes to eliminate dust and odors.