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The percentage of keeping my promise
김창민/2024-10-22
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I try to make it to most of my appointments with my friends or clients.
(The social workers usually call someone who receive benefits of social welfare service "client".)
But sometimes I forget my appointment with clients, because I focus on urgent tasks in office.
After I realized that, I call to my clients and apologize that I don't make an appointment.
Fortunately, most clients understand it!
And then, I try to reschedule with my clients.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there again, Min!
Sometimes it really happens that an appointment gets missed. At the time, you have to create a contingency and reset the appointment immediately. At least try not to reschedule it for the second time.
It is a good thing that your clients are mostly at home. However in your country, people also make other appointments. Thus, creating a sure appointment really counts.
You got most sentences correctly. Kindly take note of the underlines suggestions. Well done!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
(The social workers usually call someone who receive benefits of social welfare service "client".)
(The social workers usually call someone who receive benefits of social welfare service "client".)
>> Correct!
But sometimes I forget my appointment with clients, because I focus on urgent tasks in office.
But sometimes I forget my appointment with clients, because I focus on urgent tasks in office.
>> Correct!
Or: But sometimes, I forget my appointment with clients, because I focus on urgent tasks in the office.
After I realized that, I call to my clients and apologize that I don't make an appointment.
>> After I realized that, I call my clients and apologize that I don't make an appointment.
Fortunately, most clients understand it!
Fortunately, most clients understand it!
>> Correct!
And then, I try to reschedule with my clients.
>> Correct!
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