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What kind of development do you think is needed in your company?

이승훈/2024-10-22

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i working in a research and develop Sound team. i difficult because a lot of a create document. i think many unnecessary document. so i want a simplify documentation. and i'm hard when a lot of a work. i hope increase team member.

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Hi, Hun!

Thank you for doing your homework even though you were busy. I hope they will hire more members for your team so that someone can help or assist you in creating documents, and that you can simplify documentation in a way that is more convenient for you!

- T. Caitlyn

i working in a research and develop Sound team.

>> I am working in a research and development sound team.
i difficult because a lot of a create document.

>> I find it difficult because I have to create a lot of documents.
i think many unnecessary document.

>> I think many documents are unnecessary.
so i want a simplify documentation.

>> So, I want to simplify the documentation.
and i'm hard when a lot of a work.

>> I find it hard when there is a lot of work.
i hope increase team member.

>> I hope they will hire more team members.