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류건우/2024-10-17
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Q: What kind of accommodation do you like to stay in when you travel?
A: I want to stay in a large and comfortable accommodation.
I would like to stay in a large place because if it's too small, it's really uncomfortable to stay in.
Also, if there are not enough rooms or essentials, it would be also uncomfortable.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I would like to stay in a large place because if it's too small, it's really uncomfortable to stay in.
3. Also, if there are not enough rooms or essentials, it would be also uncomfortable.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I want to stay in a large and comfortable accommodation.
>>CORRECT!
2. I would like to stay in a large place because if it's too small, it's really uncomfortable to stay in.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>I would like to stay in a large place because a small one is really uncomfortable to stay in.
3. Also, if there are not enough rooms or essentials, it would be also uncomfortable.
>>Also, if there are not enough rooms or essentials, it would be uncomfortable.
OR>>Another discomfort is the lack of rooms or essentials.
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