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김재현/2024-10-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi teacher Divina. Sorry, I suddenly cancel in my class because I am suddeny catched to promise with my large familys Good night teacher! See you tomorrow! Homework What should foreigers know about Korea? My answer They should know the capital and the best place in Korea and they should know informations of the place that they would like to go to it
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for answering your homework. See you in our next class!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. Sorry, I suddenly cancel in my class because I am suddeny catched to promise with my large familys
>>Sorry if I suddenly canceled my class because I needed to catch up to my promise with my large family.

2. They should know the capital and the best place in Korea and they should know informations of the place that they would like to go to it
>>They should know the capital and the best place in Korea, as well as the information of the place that they would like to go to.

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