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신이라/2024-10-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1- Cockroaches are not scary. 2- My dad is strong. 3- Yira is so sweet.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Nicely done, Yira! continue on improving yourself. You are doing great! Enjoy your weekend!

- Teacher Angela

1- Cockroaches are not scary.

>> CORRECT

2- My dad is strong.

>> My dad is a strong man.

3- Yira is so sweet.

>> Yira is a sweet girl.