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What would you do if you had a few extra hours daily?

신봉규/2024-10-16

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if i had a few extra hours daily, I would spend time reading books. If I have time to read a book, it would be good for organizing my mind.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

if i had a few extra hours daily, I would spend time reading books. If I have time to read a book, it would be good for organizing my mind.
>> If I had a few extra hours each day, I would spend them reading books. Having time to read would help me organize my thoughts.