/2024-10-16
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on politics. It's perfectly fine to find politics uninteresting. I agree that different opinions can lead to conflicts, and it's wise to know when to step back from those discussions. Your English is getting better, but I suggest that you should try to incorporate more details that support your ideas and give your readers a clearer picture of your perspective. Additionally, using a variety of sentence structures can make your writing more engaging and enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of your writing!
~Teacher Cathy
Politics is not very interesting to me.
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OR>>I'm not very interested in politics.
Of course, I'm looking into important things (ex: issues of the president or lawmakers who set important national documents), but I don't like any kind of politics and I don't want to discuss it or anything.
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OR>>I pay attention to important matters, like the president's issues or laws that affect the country, but I don't like politics and dont want to talk about it.
This is because politics can cause problems because each individual's thoughts are so different.
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OR>>This is because politics can create problems since everyone thinks differently.
So when I see people like that, I avoid them.
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OR>>Therefore, I tend to steer clear of people like that.