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What kind of accommodation do you want to stay in when you travel?
이승훈/2024-10-14
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
when i go to travel, i don't care everywhere accommodation anything.
but sometimes i prefer to making BBQ and swimming pool.
because i like a swimming and making delicious food for evening. l like a fork and seafood.
and when i go to the sea nearby, i prefer to accommodation view from sea
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Hun!
Thank you for doing your homework! I agree with you! Most of the time, we don't care about accommodation, but there are times when we have preferences for activities like swimming in the summer or sightseeing. In those cases, we need to consider our accommodation.
-T. Caitlyn
when i go to travel, i don't care everywhere accommodation anything.
>> When I travel, I don't care much about accommodation or its location.
but sometimes i prefer to making BBQ and swimming pool.
but sometimes i prefer to making BBQ and swimming pool.
>> But sometimes I prefer making BBQ and using a swimming pool.
because i like a swimming and making delicious food for evening.
because i like a swimming and making delicious food for evening.
Because I like swimming and making delicious food for dinner.
l like a fork and seafood.
>> I like pork and seafood.
and when i go to the sea nearby, i prefer to accommodation view from sea
and when i go to the sea nearby, i prefer to accommodation view from sea
>> And when I go to the sea nearby, I prefer accommodation with a view of the sea.
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