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What outdoor activities do you like to do during autumn?

신봉규/2024-10-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything. and i like walking at a park or participating a flower festival.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything. and i like walking at a park or participating a flower festival.
>> I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything, and I enjoy walking in a park or participating in a flower festival.
OR >> I enjoy gazing at the Han River, letting my mind clear, and I also like taking walks in parks or attending flower festivals.