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What other factors can you improve on with your research to qualify for the Nobel Prize?

차치환/2024-10-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

"Steady and slow wins the race" It is one of my favorite proverb in English. I think the most important thing to improve my research to get an award is the attitude and philosophy for the research. When I keep going on my research with the serious and consistent attitude, I can have excellent reputation from other colleagues, and someday I would get great prizes! I hope to continue my research with keeping a long breath.

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Good evening, Dr. David!

I absolutely agree that slow and steady wins the race. It is in solid consistency and effectivity that we prove ourselves in any field with our gifts of talent and genetic abilities.

I believe that you are on the right track in your research. Your study will be a huge reference to curb cancer in men so that someday, this disease will be eradicated.

By then, I shall be so proud that you are my student in English and may this language also be a tool for you to convey your ideas that will be accessed around the world to cure cancer for both men and women.

Thank you so much for the strong consistency and brilliant ideas you have shared here on your composition. Please note down the plurality of nouns, the accurate prepositions, and the correct idioms to express your ideas in the international standards. You are on your way there. Stay consistent, excellent job!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

"Steady and slow wins the race"

>> Correct!
Or: Slow and steady wins the race.

It is one of my favorite proverb in English.

>> It is one of my favorite proverbs in English.

I think the most important thing to improve my research to get an award is the attitude and philosophy for the research.

>> I think the most important thing to improve on my research to get an award is the attitude and philosophy for the research.

When I keep going on my research with the serious and consistent attitude, I can have excellent reputation from other colleagues, and someday I would get great prizes! I hope to continue my research with keeping a long breath.

>> When I keep going on my research with the serious and consistent attitude, I can have excellent reputation from other colleagues, and someday I would get great prizes! I hope to continue my research keeping a long breath.

Or: I hope to continue my research keeping a long breath. -> I hope to continue my research for as long as I live.