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What outdoor activities do you like to do during autumn?

박소은/2024-10-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Running clubs are popular in Korea, and my friends also like running. My house is near a botanical garden, so I like to running around the park in the autumn.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Anna!
That sounds really nice! Running in a park during autumn must be so refreshing.
~Kelly^^
Running clubs are popular in Korea, and my friends also like running.
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>> Running clubs are popular in Korea, and my friends also like to run.
My house is near a botanical garden, so I like to running around the park in the autumn.
>> My house is near a botanical garden, so I like to run around the park in the autumn.
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