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Do you have any favorite healthy snacks or meals that fuel your workouts?

박소은/2024-10-11

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whenever I have a workout, I usually, enjoy eating the dried sweet potato snack. that snack dosen't have a fat and cholesterol, as well as delicious and sweet.
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Hi Anna!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it!^^
That sounds like a great post-workout snack! Sweet potatoes are really healthy and satisfying.
~Kelly^^
whenever I have a workout, I usually, enjoy eating the dried sweet potato snack.
>> Correct
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>> Whenever I work out, I usually enjoy eating dried sweet potato snacks.
that snack dosen't have a fat and cholesterol, as well as delicious and sweet.
>> That snack has no fat or cholesterol, and it’s both delicious and sweet.

>> They’re fat-free, cholesterol-free, and taste sweet and delicious.

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