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류건우/2024-10-02
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: Why do you think some people don't like attending reunions?
A: I think mostly it's because of their laziness.
I think every people has their laziness in them, and there are some people who has more, and I think they'll prefer not attending reunions.
Also, I think some people might have bad feelings about each other.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think every people has their laziness in them, and there are some people who has more, and I think they'll prefer not attending reunions.
3. Also, I think some people might have bad feelings about each other.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think mostly it's because of their laziness.
>>I think it's mostly because of their laziness.
2. I think every people has their laziness in them, and there are some people who has more, and I think they'll prefer not attending reunions.
>>I think every person has laziness in them, and some people have more of it, so I think they prefer not attending reunions.
3. Also, I think some people might have bad feelings about each other.
>>CORRECT!
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